Asha already has been confronted with Fiadh’s loneliness and was kind, she is not gonna change now. The money is really secondary now.
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Half related but having a relationship is both exciting AND very stressing for me. My inner turmoil is insane.
Follow the adventures of Fiadh and Asha across the wastelands of Arshamudd as they embark on a revenge quest amidst the Empire tumultuous uprising.
Asha already has been confronted with Fiadh’s loneliness and was kind, she is not gonna change now. The money is really secondary now.
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Half related but having a relationship is both exciting AND very stressing for me. My inner turmoil is insane.
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I appreciate Asha’s hesitation. As much as they’ve bonded I still imagine Asha wouldn’t know what to say to console Fiadh, with little experience. Though she’s thinking as quickly as she can, because they have become close enough she’d want to try. Oddly enough it makes me think of her sister Atta, I imagine she knows from living with her what consoling someone would be like, but she’s never had to be in the big sister role herself before.
The raindrop effect you use is quite good, where it falls and bounces off of surfaces makes you notice its presence more. Also Asha’s side profile is well drawn, especially around her shoulders and biceps she’s visibly more bulky. Their bodily language works as well, Asha trying to silently draw near Fiadh first, then looking away and wondering how she would do this. Fiadh as well, while breaking down he’s visibly fighting against it and isn’t trying to let it out on purpose. Last page I appreciate how it became half-shouting as he got frustrated with it happening, and now is covering his face to weather it out of sight. It’s a hard thing to get right, people forget it always comes with some anger because you don’t want it to happen and dislike the feeling greatly.