I quickly looked back at the List of Chapters for Arc 2
“Chapter 4: Dragon’s Treasure”
Can’t get past me! Not that it wasn’t super obvious this guy is a threat, haha. Fiadh has the sense not to act dumb and ditzy here. Someone called ‘Dragon’ is either a title very important, like “The Dragon of the Emperor”, or less likely had very eccentric parents.
Panel 2 is a nice shot of Fiadh’s bent legs while he’s getting up. Don’t know why but that stood out to me, you drew his calves well. I also like his striking Vail-coloured eyes and feather, they stand out very well with the grayscale art. And a smaller thing I liked is the wobbly text bubble of Fiadh’s in the third panel, like he got caught by the teacher breaking the rules, gets across the guilty little kid tone he definitely said it with trying to get himself out the interrogation.
It’s interesting how this character is calling Fiadh’s bluffs, he’s really got Fiadh figured out like a book and he’s barely known him for a few seconds. He’s right, it’ll be interesting to see Fiadh has to explain himself to him now.
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I quickly looked back at the List of Chapters for Arc 2
“Chapter 4: Dragon’s Treasure”
Can’t get past me! Not that it wasn’t super obvious this guy is a threat, haha. Fiadh has the sense not to act dumb and ditzy here. Someone called ‘Dragon’ is either a title very important, like “The Dragon of the Emperor”, or less likely had very eccentric parents.
Panel 2 is a nice shot of Fiadh’s bent legs while he’s getting up. Don’t know why but that stood out to me, you drew his calves well. I also like his striking Vail-coloured eyes and feather, they stand out very well with the grayscale art. And a smaller thing I liked is the wobbly text bubble of Fiadh’s in the third panel, like he got caught by the teacher breaking the rules, gets across the guilty little kid tone he definitely said it with trying to get himself out the interrogation.
It’s interesting how this character is calling Fiadh’s bluffs, he’s really got Fiadh figured out like a book and he’s barely known him for a few seconds. He’s right, it’ll be interesting to see Fiadh has to explain himself to him now.